BOTTOM
Not Yet Rated - Running Time: 1:30
The press kit for Bottom, an independent film from Atlanta-based
Calligraphy Pictures about corporate downsizing and the desperate
acts it occasionally provokes, describes writer/director Joseph
L. Stovall (who goes by the pen name Jelese) as a former computer
man who left the cubicles to pursue a career in filmmaking.
Well. Maybe Jelese shouldnt have quit his day job just yet.
While I hate to discourage ambitious youth, I daresay Mr. Stovall
has a fair distance yet to go before he becomes the next Quentin
Tarantino. However, although his debut release (which, incidentally,
won the 2004 Jury Prize at the Spaghetti Junction Urban Film Festival)
is fraught with problems, they are not all his faultmany
of them can be blamed on his actors, whose technique ranges from
mediocre to truly horrendous. I have said before that good performances
can cover a multitude of sins, but when the acting is bad, all
the other flaws are brought into sharp relief. Frankly, Ive
seen better acting in porn movies.
Job security is a major concern among many office workers in
the United States, especially in the highly competitive computer
industry, where there is often a glut of potential employees for
relatively few positions. Such is the case in Bottom, where
the staff of an Atlanta computer firm (we never really learn what
the company does) faces cutbacks for the third time this year.
The film starts with Derrick Jones (Jason Turner) discussing this
issue with his friends on the other sides of his cubicle. Although
his co-workers, Bob (Gary Prewitt) and Leila (Eva Acosta), are
somewhat tense about the upcoming meeting, Derrick seems confident
that he is safe, especially since he is referred to as the
best damn programmer in the district. This is why it comes
as such a shock when Derrick discovers that he is among the several
people named in the latest round of corporate layoffs, and his
feelings of desperation are intensified when he finds out that
his young wife (Sherie DeBellotte) is pregnant. Soon he is cruising
around his neighborhoodhopped up on something that looks
like red cream soda in an unmarked plastic bottleand after
a trip to a weapons store, he returns to his workplace to exact
revenge on his supervisor.
While Jeleses well-meaning screenplay is really only
guilty of being rather dull and simplistic, it is the delivery
of such by his lackluster cast which has pretty much damned this
movie from the start. Its technical problems (muffled, inconsistent
soundtrack, occasionally pixellated video, harsh, artless lighting,
etc.) could be excused as the simple financial realities of a
struggling industry newcomer, if his film had a cast with the
talent to overshadow them. Unfortunately, that is not the case
here. The principals, like Turner, Acosta, Prewitt, and DeBellotte,
are almost adequatetheir range suggests that of people who
havent had much experience in acting but who show at least
a spark of talentand the same could be said of some of the
actors populating smaller roles, like Kermit Rolison, who plays
another disgruntled worker, and Barbara Washington (the supervisor
who must announce the painful news). But then there are a few
who truly stink up every scene theyre in, like Steve Warren
and Deborah Childs, whose terribly trite dialogue is underscored
by their howlingly bad reading of it. Warren, cast as an openly
hostile white racist who apparently doesnt have the good
sense to shut up even when hes talking to co-workers who
belong to the groups he condemns, is bad enough when hes
simply chatting, but truly awful when his character is supposed
to show some emotion. Surprisingly, it is he who has the longest
and most impressive résumé of the entire cast, even
appearing in such mainstream upcoming films as Bobby Jones,
Stroke Of Genius (starring everybodys favorite Jesus
Christ, Jim Caviezel) and Last Goodbye, with David Carradine
and Faye Dunaway. My apologies to Mr. Warrenhe must have
something Im not seeing.
A few years ago, Mike Judge addressed the issues of corporate
cutbacks in the computer industry, and did so hilariously, in
his film Office Space. While
I wouldnt suggest that Jelese take his film so far in the
comic direction as Judge did, he should realize that a little
humor, or romance, or sex, or meaningful character relationship,
can be helpful to bring out the drama or tragedy of the more weighty
scenes. While his text shows that he is obviously passionate about
this subject (heck, maybe he even popped a few people when he
left his last job), its gravity is all but undone by its own single-mindedness.
No one in this movie ever talks about anything but job insecurity
and money troubles; no one laughs, no one jokes, there is very
little sub-plot, sub-text, or significant art to the writing.
The twist ending does add an unexpected caveat, but this is not
nearly enough to make it interesting; the script has a simplified,
after-school-special feel to it which, again, is emphasized by
the styleless acting and the lack of convincing effects. There
is plenty of violence in this movie, but very little blood. People
are shot, they fall to the floor, they lie motionless, as in a
school production, but there is no realism to suggest the seriousness
of the situation. Whats more, while the music of several
artists is heard during some scenes, the most emotionally charged
sequence, the climax, occurs without a note playing. Music is
not something I often notice enough to comment on, but the lack
of it during this crucial scene just makes it look awkward and
amateurish.
Perhaps Jeleses wife and casting director, Kecia Stovall, must bear some of the blame for the failure of this production, but maybe she was simply unable to attract more talent to the project. Whatever the reason, one would hope that this young team put their collective Bottom behind them and press on. After all, theres nowhere to go but up. *½